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The choreography is really cool and creative, the animation just needs a little clean up. Great work!

SkProductions responds:

Yeah I agree with you're critique, I was basicly challanged myself to make as much animations as possible in a year and the results were mixed and caused some issues that could've been solved by a little clean up on the animations.

Thank you so much for the review!

Holy crap, this is awesome! I think the fight is a little hard to follow, there's just so much movement and effects going on that it's a bit difficult to know where the characters are without really focusing. But otherwise, great work!

Love the PS1 vibes, really add to the atmosphere.

NahManacles responds:

Thank you!

Facial expressions look good! Keep it up!
Die Mimik sieht gut aus! Weiter so!

JuniperMart96 responds:

Thank you, Mr. man.
Danke, herr mann.

Good start! I think if you really want to be serious about this (which I highly encourage you to take the time to do so), then I'd say look into any action or martial arts movie and check out the choreography. You may find something interesting that you can add to your animation. Also consider moving your camera for a little more dynamic action. Claymation is hard, and I applaud you for giving it a try!

FunkyGunk responds:

Thanks! What I was testing with this video was the picture quality (not too bad, but I've got a better camera now) and the frame rate (about 10fps). Next I'm going to try making a longer video with sound. Eventually I'll get into more complicated techniques. Again Thanks for the feedback

Oh my god, for a first animation, this is awesome! I may be a little biased since I've seen the M trailer on YouTube already, but I find the rating here to be too low for all the work put into it. The shading and visual effects obviously need work (those have been improved in the M trailer), but the motions and choreography are really good! Hope to see your future work!

Love it! Face is incredibly expressive. Happy Holidays!

I love the toon shading, looks awesome! A little more animation on the stomp would be nice, but for a first time this is incredibly impressive! Did you use Grease Pencil for the face expressions?

Nibran responds:

Thank you! yes i did, i found it easier than rigging a face, and i also felt this design works better with a Hand drawn face, Grease pencil is certainly great to get the job done

Currently learning 3D animation and I'm working on some big projects!

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